Blog #25 Reflect On class experience 11/13/09

Today in class we continued to work on our comparison or contrast essay. The class went to the writing center today and there was a few of us that had our rough drafts completed, so we went into a room and had a discussion about our papers. When listening to other essays you begin to second guess your own paper. But it also gives you ideas that you can add to your paper if your lacking in areas. I received good feedback from my paper, on what I should add and what I should take out my essay.
I also listen to other essays and gave feedback on there papers.I notice a lot of things in other essays that I was corrected on in my tutoring session, like using the word you, or using first person. I also gave advice on thesis which I think I got a good understanding of in my tutoring recession so I hope I can help someone else out. I think that wraps up everything we completed in class today so now I can go back and get ready to turn my final draft in. Oh, I also learned that the essay is six sentences or more so now I have to go back and figure away to add at least one sentence to each paragraph. Wow! that's going to be hard.